My never ending dream

by Karl Wild GG23   Nov 16, 2006


You're my forever shining sun,
My endless flowing stream,
Reality can't be this fun,
I must be in a dream.

And in this dream I hope I stay,
To never ever awake,
But if I awake to my dismay,
I'll know my dreams weren't fake.

I'll know that you blessed them,
With your smile shining bright,
You were the rose to my stem,
And guided me through the night.

The one who never left my side,
And always held my hand,
With you my love is never denied,
Your my only life demand.

You're the reason I don't break,
My air, my heart, my soul,
The reason for every breath I take,
Your loves beyond my control.

you're my forever shining sun,
my endless flowing stream,
you're my number one,
my never ending dream.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awww wow this was brillant. i really liked it a lot. you really have a way with words. what a great job you did on this. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    It was a cool poem. I liked it. The flow was there and the word choice as always was wonderful. I gace it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    This poem was beautifully written... so much feelings and emotions were really well put into it...I really liked this one... It was really deep... Hope to read more of your work... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This is beautiful, the emotion is pure and deep.
    This flows so well, and the wording is amazing, so beautifully penned
    keep it up
    love Tara-Kay
    xxxx