Execrated Lips

by Gem   Nov 20, 2006


I feel myself falling
Deep under your spell
I can't make a sound
Not a whimper or yell

You stretch out a hand
Almost in slow motion
Your face doesn't change
It's void of emotion

Your execrated lips
Painted blood red
Give way in a smile
And fill me with dread

You step forward closer
One step at a time
I can't look away
As you slowly sublime

You come nearer still
I'm unable to stir
I know what you want
You want me to defer

I wrench my eyes shut
And let out a scream
Knowing deep down
You must be a dream

I peek through my lashes
Your nowhere around
But I know you'll be back
I'm the victim you hound ©

*Gem*

(This was for a contest where I was given a title and had to write a poem based on it. I did my best)

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Excellent vocabulary here and again great job avoiding clicheswith this kinda things it hard but WELL DONE

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    You did your best....? Well i have to say your best was amazing. Such a great poem. I cant believe you wrote this from just a title. Absolute talent at its height.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hope you won the contest...thsi was really very unique...i mean the way this all was presented...so many poems are there on nightmares...but i really liked this one

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    This is great lol i bet you won, if you didnt something must be seriously wrong with those ppl lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Awww wow i loved that it flowed beautifully and the rhyme scheme was great woo go gem =]=]=]=]

    ~*~Jen~*~

Read All Comments (5)

More Poems By Gem