Dear, do you remember?

by BlueDreams   Nov 24, 2006


My sweetheart... Dear, do you remember?
The sweep of love's dimension?
Of how we sought each other, so
We scarce could bear the tension.

We'd search among the crowded ways
With eager, burning, questing
Until the sight, the words, the kiss
Would still our world to resting.

The time together we would spend
Flew swift as swallows fleeing
But once alone, the hours dragged by
Monotonous, dead, unseeing.

Anew, our greetings joyous glee
Brought comfort, strength and passion
Our love renewed with boundless depths
Enthralled us in its fashion.

And when we parted, ere the dawn
With promised love's bright sorrow
The nights were never long enough
We swore to stretch the morrow.

But then, tomorrow never comes
I lie here, bereft and grieving
With just the ashes of our love
Cold comfort, born of grieving.

(The shadows of ray4)

Note: this would be my last, thank you for reading.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The flow throughout this piece was smooth and your word choice great. Very descriptive, I found it to hold vivd emotions which were absolutely stunning. All I can say to this piece is beautiful. Truely heartfelt. Well done keep up the good work~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Great as usual

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful!
    But then, tomrrow never comes
    I lie here, bereft and grieving
    With just the ashes of our love
    Cold comfort, born of grieving.
    These lines really touched my heart.

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Beautiful, I hope that the footnote is not what I percieve it to be. I hope that you continue writing, for if you were to not it would be an unimaginable waste of talent. Best wishes. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Very touching and well-done.....
    "flew swift as swallows fleeing...".........very nice.