Angels Whispered

by Gem   Nov 25, 2006


One day in heaven
Two angels were looking down
And then both of their gazes
Fell on a certain town

They saw a boy and girl
Who were both feeling low
They were made for each other
but they just didn't know

The angels were confused
Maybe Cupid's arrow missed
Now it was up to them
To make sure there was a kiss

They plotted and they planned
Cos they knew this love was real
When the couple got togther
Their happiness was sealed

I'm so glad the angels plotted
Cos that lonely girl was me
And when they led the way to you
I saw how happy we could be

I promise you this now
I'll love 'til forever
Cos the angels whispered "perfect"
When we got together ©

*Gem*

(I love you Marcus xx)

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  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely as always....! I love the last stanza! I found this poem perfect! I say the angels helped me find my love too! He is pretty perfect! You and Marcus seem perfect too! Lovely poem!
    xoxo

    P.S. It seems you haven't been writing many poems! I'm starting to miss them! Hurry up and write some! lol

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Omgshhhh wow i didnt expect that ending that was AMAZING aww such a unique writter..EXCELLENT keep it up hunn another FAV

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is so creative...the way u present a simple feeling is just out of this world...its just amazing...so beautifully expressed..glad to hv u in my fav list.. :o)

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Wowwwww... ur just so amazing, how many times have i told u that? and many more times shall come.. wonderful poem, excellent job :) 5/5

    Im back.. :)

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I loved this poem and the last stanza was so sweet.
    Charisma*

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