The Shadow

by geeeeee   Dec 18, 2006


The shadow beckons me forward
I am drawn to take a step
But fear will not let my body move
I edge to the side
And I fall helplessly to the ground
At the mercy of its power
The shadow of darkness
Etches, draws a white door
In amongst the blanket of complete darkness
I see each time I close my eyes
When my mind is free of dreams
I slowly stride forward
My heart is racing, in overtime
A hand, as cold as ice is held out
I have the urge to grab hold of it
I reach with caution
It draws me in
And walks with me through the door
All past insecurities are left behind
In the world of the forgotten
As I stare into the shadows eyes
I see myself staring back
My fears are at heart
But I will defeat them
With my shadow by my side
My journey does not end here
Indeed it only begins
As I enter a whole new world

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    This one is nice I like it. "My mind is free of dreams I stride forward,my heart is racing overtime." Great writting. 5/5.

    Ty. Best of luck!

    Ray

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    How well you have described Death.

    My heart is racing, in overtime
    A hand, as cold as ice is held out
    I have the urge to grab hold of it
    I reach with caution
    It draws me in

    Excellent. Wonderful imagery. dear.

    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by anna

    ..."My fears are at heart
    But I will defeat them
    With my shadow by my side".... love it!! its beautifully written with so much hidden meaning!! thanx 4 letting me experience it! :P!! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent words!!
    They really carried the poem well, setting the tone, describing whats happening and in such detail.
    A brilliant dark poem!
    I look forward to reading your mirrored refrain poem, let me know when you've done one =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by girly†

    Wow nice poem!

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