by BeautifulDisaster Dec 18, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
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She slowly walks |
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These are my fav types of poems |
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Aww.. this is cute.. the imagery it wonderful |
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Aww.. this is cute.. the imagery it wonderful |
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Nice emotion and heart you put into it. The flow wasn't so good though. good luck. |
by angelina
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I like it but i dont really get ur rythem ... but i really like it and i got the point you were making |