Darling I Miss You!

by Sweet lig   Dec 21, 2006


Everywhere I go,
Whatever I do,
Your always in my mind!

When I'm all alone,
I wish you're here,
And join me!

I don't pretend,
I'm so lonely without you,
And my heart wants to be with you!

This few days,
I am feeling so lost; Coz,
Darling I miss you!

i dedicate this poem to my darling... I Miss You u a lot!

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  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I miss my darling too :(
    Great job
    I love it
    *~NearlyCrazy6~*

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is an original poem but filled with such love...i enjoyed this poem...

    "Your always in my mind!"

    ^^although in this line i think you should change "in" to "on" .. it would sound alot better.

    overall great job.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is an absolutely beautiful poem. The flow was perfect and the love in it is easy to see. I am sure he is missing you. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    Im sure your darling misses you too. what a wonderfully written poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Short and sweet. 5/5 for th egood wordings and simple but effective flow. Good keep it up :)

    Tc
    Fsams

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