Entangled in the Moon

When I first read this poem it sounded like an anti suicide poem and that’s something very rare on this site and it really grabbed my attention. In the end however I was shocked when the angel died, but you managed to create it in a very poetic and sad way. Well done, I loved it.

I thought this an awesome poem, i like the imagery as in scorched blackened wings, very vivid and realistic, and yet far off and distant

your servant:
atticus

Upon the moon
She wrought her wrath
Surrounded the orb
With a bloody, red bath

Once again another powerful write. I think that your poems are absoulty amazing. You have some true talent, the words youuse hold so much power they leave your reader with absoulty perfect image. I hope that made sense. I love your work, please keep writting for my soul couldn't handle such a tragic loss.

Wow...I loved this poem it was excellent definitly my fave so far!

Should i say wow again?? hmm nah i should but this is another great poem... u hav an awsome talent....and it shows =)