I am through

by ShootingStar179   Dec 22, 2006


My first boyfriend,
Although I was not your first you were particularly naive,
What kind of girl would want to hear about the happiness when you left?
The kind boy I had had affection and tenderness,
Who knew this boy would turn out to be a complete mess?

Lost one,
When I cut off all communication in order not to cry,
You are increasing my loss of emotion towards you,
You are upset when I say I do not want to be hurt any longer,
You do not realize that by doing this I am stronger.

Angry fool,
The lies and the emotion you try to set onto me,
They do not affect a soul careless to your mind games,
I tried to deal with your ignorance before I bid adieu,
I just want you to know that I am through.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    My favourite part was the last two lines, I thought those really stood out.
    I liked this, I thought it was well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    =]
    A very good poem. Your emotions shown through and you descriptions were fantastic. It feels nice to read a poem that's about being strong in life.
    The only problem I see is that the flow was a bit rocky in some places.
    Overall, wonderful job writing this one. Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Say it loud, say it proud!

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