Three Words

by Gem   Dec 24, 2006


I don't say three words
As much as I should
I'd say them all the time
You know that I would

You just mean so much
I need to make that clear
Nothing really matters
As long as you are near

Please don't ever doubt
That my feelings aren't real
Cos darling this is true
This love is a big deal

It doesn't really matter
If anyone approves
There's no point denying
That you make my world move

With you I am myself
There's no need to pretend
I know deep in my heart
We're together 'til the end

So I'll say three special words
Cos I know you feel it too
I'll say them every single day
Marcus, I love you! ©

*Gem*

(An old poem I wrote just as me and Marcus started going out. I think i've overused those three words since then =)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Three simple words, yet they mean the world, don't they. To say them... hear them... feel them. Isn't that what makes living worth living.

    A great tribute to a feeling not spoken of enough.

    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Aw how cute! i loved the detailing, again. it was really just wow. lol i cant describe. haha 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    You already know what i think Gem.. Amazing :) i havent read one poem that hasnt been amazing of urs. Just exceptional, wonderful write, keep it up! 100/5 :P

    ~[AnotherDream]~

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    There's no point denying
    That you make my world move

    Glad you've overused the words....good poem!
    Btw, those top lines were my fav...loved the imagery!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    This is lovely............
    .....................................
    ....................................

    For your consideration:

    A comment on Stanza 3:......
    You write:..."Please don't ever doubt
    That my feelings aren't real".........

    Essentially you are saying:...Please do not ever doubt that my feelings are not real.........I'm thinking you meant:....Please don't ever doubt
    That my feelings ARE real...
    Peace,
    GrammaEditorWhoAnnoysALittle........;-)

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