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by Espoirfailed Dec 28, 2006
Sadness, depression /
I remember feeling something
I remember when it all stopped.
And I remember the notes I wrote.
I left them on my dresser.
Told myself this time I would choke.
This time I'd do it better.
But it's an idle threat
Cuz it never seems to work.
No matter how many times I check,
My hearts still beating,
And I can't seem to stop it.
A fly stuck in a vacant web.
No getting away
But no easy end.
Cuz the spider died yesterday.
I tried so many times
But what doesn't kill you makes you stronger
Or at least it might if only,
It didn't make the pain last longer.
LoveloveloveloveLOVE it. Why I have not read your old stuff yet is beyond me, I absolutely loved this piece. Every line stood out in some way, every stanza left me more breathless. Great job.
by The Queen of Spades
Wow...this poem is amazing. I have felt this so many times and you really captured the essence of the situation. I love this poem and its my favorite of yours. 5/5
by Vikas Tapan Bhadra
I liked this one
Wow! thats so gud! luved the rhyme pattern! 5/5!