Mistaken

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Dec 30, 2006


In a dimly lit room,
Surrounded by bars,
And drunken demons,
Sat a beautiful child.

A young girl,
Blond hair,
Blue eyed beauty,
Grinning with no regrets.

A smirk of success,
She got you back,
She said she would,
Remember.

That one night,
A couple months ago,
You killed her,
Shattered her heart.

You crushed her world,
Letting it crumble,
Through stone cold fingers,
Mercilessly.

Over her shoulder,
She yelled through tears,
â??You'll regret that you lied,
And you too shall die.â??

Her intentions were clear,
She wanted you to suffer,
She wanted you to feel,
Every inch of her pain.

You deserved it,
You cheated,
You lied,
You promised.

â??I love you,
Now and forever,â??
You always said,
Faking a smile.

Soon she realized,
Your lies,
Your promises,
To other girls.

Saying they will
Forever be yours,
Treating them
All the same.

In the end,
Treating them like crap,
Like they are all the same,
There to feed your needs.

She developed,
Pure hatred,
For you,
And those alike.

Vowed to hate,
And seek revenge,
On those jerks,
Who tormented her.

Even if,
It led her to this:
A jacked up cell,
In a jacked up world.

She had to do it,
Not just for her,
But those other girls,
She drew a gun.

She left you a note,
On your car window,
Saying to meet her,
One last time.

That night,
She confronted you,
Whispering,
One last word.

â??Good-bye.â??

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  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow this poem had so much emotion it was wonderful ur a great writer keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This poem is sooooooo good. i love it you are so talentd keep it up and thanx so much for the comment. shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    As I said in the contest forum, i still think this poem is Amazing! It has an excellent story line and kept me wanting to read more. This story is so true of many people. The ending was strong and it was a great poem throughout. Excellent write. =] 5/5 Definately.

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow, i really liked that, go her! lol, good revenge! good poem, good write, i liked it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Wow, this is brilliant poem! how one girl seeks revenge! nice job!!!!!!!!!! i love it! oh and sorry that i only stat commenting now!