by Michelle18 Dec 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Sitting alone looking around, |
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Great imagery and its sad too. I liked the rhyming except the last line - a little forced. But still good, the other lines make up for it. =) |
by Curry
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Awh this i sad but really good! |
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Wow, great use of words... |
by LadyPearl
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Good job, great emotions. You can improve by adding more imagery and descriptive words. Keep it up, thanks for reading my poem. |
by Darien
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I liked the rhymes in this poem, they were quite clever. Another sad write, looking forward to reading more sometime. |