Will Carry On

by BeautifulxMess   Dec 31, 2006


He always makes sure I'm OK.
He never lets my heart fade away.
He always holds me close to him;
Kisses me when the night starts to dim.

If I had to live without his touch.
This world would be way too much.
When everything rolls on my shoulder.
He lets it go and it's all over.

He never knows what he's done.
All the times I felt like someone.
All the smiles he brought to me.
And all the times he helped me see.

He won't let me fall on the ground.
He's too busy keeping me around.
I won't let him go for nothing at all.
He's the angel that breaks my fall.

When I start to lose his hand.
He brings me back up again.
I'll never know what life would be like.
Too see it without him by my side.

And one day he'll be the last thing I see.
The last prayer to rise my wing.
He's the courage that kept me strong.
And my undying love that will carry on.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    At the end, the rhymes just kinda fell apart, but i absolutely loved the beginning. It was great. I only wish we all could have that!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is excellent so filled with love and emotion. it's so very true that the one we love gives us all these things and more excellent job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Great poem homie!

    i relly liked the end where you said he would be the last thing u see

    aww how sweet !

    5/5 !!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Great Job. I loved it. The flow and structure were both good. Although I felt you used the word, "He" way too much to start lines. Other than that great Job!

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Excellent poem, but a few typos.

    Kisses me when the night starts to dim.- TOO
    Too see it without him by my side.- TO
    The last prayer to rise my wing.- im pretty sure you want RAISE

    otherwise its a pretty poem. 5/5

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