Look at what you've done to me

Awh this is really sad=[ but amazing writing! it definetly gets a 5 from me.

Wow. that is all i can say right now. wow wow wow. that poem had sooo much feeling and meaning in it and i can tell that came straight from the heart. Keep hanging in there girl, and in the meantime keep expressing yourself thru poetry. You have such talent and you need to keep using it. Keep entering lots of contests, and soon pretty much everyone will know that you have some talent. 5/5.. i wish i could have rated higher :) well done!!

"I'm dying here
in pools of blood
I'm so unraveled
so undone"

That stanza made me want to cry for some reason, i think i'm going though an emotional stage (it is early morning after all, lol) but seriously, this poem had so much emotion in it that really reached out to the reader. It's excellent
5/5 for sure
*Gem*

(I'll write one about my pet cat soon, lol)

I like this poem. It shows alot of emotion with a nice flow. My favorite stanza was the fourth one.

Tammie

Wow. i must say, with each poem, i'm liking your writing more and more! you could become famous with the lines that you write dear! 5/5