How low

by Espoirfailed   Jan 4, 2007


It was great when I could feel
When I thought love was real.
I hope you know you've left me broken,
With all the things we've left unspoken.
And inviting them round, wasn't that kind
It's not that I mind,
I just didn't think they'd go.
But now it comes to show
What they think
And how fu**ing low they'd sink.

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ok not the best poem ive ever wrote but i really needed to let this out

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  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I like this. At some parts it was a little confusing and hard to follow, but all in all it wasn`t too bad.

    5.5
    :]