But You Won't Get Me

by cupidsxvictim   Jan 9, 2007


Whats interesting about this poem.. is it can be related to anything.. you can think of a certain guy in your life, peer pressure, lust, or anything else that comes to mind. So here it goes...

Your easily mistaken by poison
just like crotin from the Asian tree.
your intoxicating, pursuing for indulgence
But you won't get me.

You redefine the attributes of many men.
Of that I know and can emphatically guarantee
that you give them the unimaginable detestable attributes
But you won't get me.

You can try and try evermore.
But I will win to the highest possible extent and degree
Perhaps I do not know every one of your maneuvers.
But you won't get me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Gee this is good. i loved how you ended it. ended each para with the title. made the effect way more dramatic. i wanted to read it more.

    5/5 bravo! clap clap.

    David

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This was cool i like the whole relate it to anything kinda thing great work

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    That's kinda really cool how it can be related to by anything. To me, it was like, i don't know. I was too busy thinking of what it could be, i guess. Maybe i'll go read again and see. great job.

    -parker