My friend, I am your enemy

by VioletRaven   Jan 9, 2007


In my absence I may cease to exist
I am unworthy again, this time of you.
I flee to a haven that is not safe
I sleep and trap myself
I cannot speak lest I hurt you once again.

Who am I to be called friend,
When I neglect to exist?

What is your gain
When I bring only troubles?

Where is my loyalty
When I should be at your side?

Why am I unreliable
When I am so dependant?

I am the betrayer.
I am the traitor.
I am your enemy.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ixora

    I like it. its very deep and simple.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hey Raven. Long time no see. This is a brilliant poem. it's highly emotional and very powerful. i'm sorry i havn't commented in a while, i havn't been online in ages. but yeah, your efforts on this piece are to be commended. really and truly, it's beautifully moving to read. keep writing

    -Suz xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by President Dead

    Hey, It's been a long time since I've read a poem by you. And now i know why I used to read them so often, over and over again. I remember reading your first few pieces and commenting, and you did the same for me. I just want to thankyou for that, and for this awesome poem that you've written. It seems to create an atmosphere around me as i read it. And the final stanza is chilling to an extent. Great Work

    President Dead

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