Back On The Mend

by Gem   Jan 12, 2007


We really need to work this out
We can't run away and hide
I can't let this love fade away
Cos I need you by my side

Everytime we have a fight
A part of me's destroyed
We can't keep going on like this
It's not something to avoid

It's been going on a while now
And it really has to stop
We can't keep putting this off
And letting the subject drop

Cos it we don't talk it though
And get it all sorted out
We won't have much hope left
Of that I have no doubt

I love you Marcus, more than life
And I can't let this be the end
So please honey, let's stop the fights
And get our love back on the mend ©

*Gem*
19/10/06

(I gave this to Marcus after a fight and it worked it out, lmao)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Why is it kind of silly eh??
    We worked it out because of it, so i owe a lot to that bloody poem!
    So c\'mon, why is it silly? He reads every single one of my poems so it makes no fu(k1n difference if i give it to him!
    I\'m stressed at the moment, if you can\'t tell. I have a lot going on

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    This was a good poem. lol. I can't believe you gave it to him after a fight though. That's kinda silly. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very nice. It's good you don't just "drop it" all that means is it will build up to be bigger and harder next time.
    One typo.
    Cos it we don't talk it though
    should be "if"
    See ya!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Great use of words. alot of heartfelt and tuching lines. lot of emotion. keep it up xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very sweet. I am glad Marcus appreciates your gift of poetry. Nice write.

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