Abundant Sky

Hey winner....so I want to expand upon the comments I made on the boards...as I felt they were spot on regarding your piece.

[I felt this was a multi layered piece, which had a duel message running through it of the complexities of relationships communicated through the medium of the sky and weather types. Just beautiful]

What i meant when I said this of you winning poem is that it was obvious to me that you had some pretty powerful emotions or memories fueling this piece, but you didn't just let them spill onto the page blankly....it seemed to me to held onto them and worked them all through a beautiful metaphor, which was immensely visual in nature and actually added more understanding of what you were feeling by doing this.

Every line hold more insight, plus the knowledge of the simple feelings that inspired the metaphors.....put simply...this is a wonderful expression of emotions...

I take my proverbial hat off to you...as soon as i saw this poem I know it would be a winner....

regards, Kevin.

I could mumble here about vocabulary and imagery, but what I really have to say is.....How esoteric and simultaneously how accessible!..Bravo!....
You may have a new fan....

Still a work of art...just love this poem

Beautiful..

embellished with rich words and metaphores

Your poem was realy realy good!! Mabye you could come over to see mine sometime
^_^

~Sablehuskey~