Color In The Grey.

by Teria   Jan 18, 2007


Color In The Grey.

I've hidden my soul beneath the cold hard ground.
Driven away those who tend to come around.
The ones that show me love and care
Are the ones that I can hardly bare.
I've searched for ways to disappear.
The only way is through my fear.

Death subsides within my heart.
Slowly tearing my insides apart.
Filling it's hunger with worthless bites.
Gradually stealing my human rights.
As if I'm forfeiting my actual life.
Reality is filling with bitterly strife.

As pain is ripping away my dreams.
I forget happiness, and now it seems..
I have nothing less to say..
Hoping for someone to color in the Grey.
As my life slips further down the road.
And, I'm left alone and freezing cold.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I LOVED this!!!
    I think this is one of the best I have read of your's.
    That second stanza was just...birlliant, my favourite part, it had so much impact.
    Wonderful work!

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    LOVE THIS POEM.. ofcourse.. thats why it won 1st place.. great job.. great rhyme and flow.. and i just love it

  • 18 years ago

    by NicholeNymphetamine

    Wow, this is really good. You can definatly feel your emotions.

  • 18 years ago

    by *~H3LL Iz 3MPTY @LL TH3 D3VIL$ @R3 H3R3~*

    Omg
    i love it
    idk wat the other 2 aretalkin about but i really liked it

    u gotta nw wat the person is goin threw 2 imagine it

    its real nice kinda sad
    but its one of the best poems in this place

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyWaszky

    Good poem. but i feel left hanging!! i want to know more!! =[[

    Also the 'and' in the end does not fit as well as i think you intended it too. you should make the line longer in teh middle instead of using and in the beginning.

    otherwise great write again. =]

    xx3Lauren

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