This is a lie of your life time

by Al   Jan 19, 2007


When I look up into the sky
I see shimmering lights
I see clouds grow dark outside
I see moon light
Reminding me of your eyes
I see Shadows fly
Like your beauty, that I despise
Leaving me a feeling of emptiness inside
I see my darkness in the night sky
I see stars fly by
I see this all in my mind, with my closed eyes
I see it all the time
And now I see it was a lie
Deception in your disguise
Clouding my mind
Seeing a mirror outside
Showing my life pass by from inside
With the mirror by my side and you climb out with a knife
Stabbing my mind, with one last slice, with one last line
\\\"This is a lie of your life time\\\".

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    You've put together a very addictive poem here, which carried me along to a very succinct conclusion. Sometimes short poems look hurried and forced, but this had a very real sense of contemplation. Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Me likey :) well done darlin. laura xx

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I understand what< eyes wide shut >
    means, thats the line missing above
    i type it i just know what happen to it
    maybe its like the movie the FLY
    maybe that line going to pop up
    somewhere else oooooooooooo
    cool lol i got to much time on
    my hands DO YOU THINK?

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Nice real nice""""""""""""""" i under
    stand now what
    means, i like the last line the most
    its like you set yhe whole poem up just to say that line. YO" GOOD
    JOB" sorry the YO A PHILADELPHILA
    THING.

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