I hate you

by Kaila   Jan 19, 2007


My hearts beating faster and faster
My eyes are filled with rage
How could you do this to me?
Why canâ??t you just act your age
I trusted you
My supposed best friend
Now everythingâ??s through
Iâ??m so glad this is the end
You knew I loved him
But what did you do
You got all flirty and dumb
But what else is knew
He was mine
That special one
You think you hurt me
But you havenâ??t won
The lies you said
The games you played
Was it all a lie
I guess weâ??ll never find out
Because I hope you choke and
DIE!

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this is such a good poem filled with anger. Great job! 5//5

    *Cindy*

  • 16 years ago

    by awww

    Well one things for sure in this poem.. theres a lot of hate! such strong anger that really and maybe literally burst out through the words.. it really captured me and even made me feel a bit uneasy.. cause i was imagining someone actually say this to my face.. so you did a good job here.. direct, strong and true..

    ~angel~

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Alot of anger throughout this poem which is great it was so strong you really need to edit those little A things though because it throws the reader off track. Good job with htis though~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I can feel ur anger here very good use of emotions just fix the A thingys again and it will b another awsome poem but in my oppion make it a lil longer give more details...=)

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    I REALLY ´loved this one..
    I've had somehow same situation with my friend..

    Excellend job. 5/5

    Keep it up nd Take care!

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