Forever In A Bottle.

by Teria   Jan 19, 2007


Forever In A Bottle.

I'm sailinggg awayyy,'
The song echoes in the back of her mind.
As she's rapidly trying to find,
the distance between her and land.

She sees a distant mirage.
Hoping it's what she needs.
She's now on her knees..
Begging to make it safely.

The closer she gets,
The slower it moves.
The less it soothes,
and air is leaking.

She can barely breathe,
in this tiny space.
Forever crowed in this place,
dreams that frighten..

her every move.
And, ones that break.
her heart thats fake.
she's searching for a way...

out of this bottle.
somewhere safe not cold.
filled with courage, oh so bold.
she's searching for something..

That's not even there.
She's fading away,
each and every day.
she's losing her hope..

And, she's forever
in a bottle.
drifting upon water.
Lonely and cold..
Forever
'She's sailingggg awayy.'

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved how you repeated 'sailing awaaay' I thought that was creative and made it stand out.
    I liked the imagery in this and the wording was breathtaking.
    Excellent work

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    VERY CREATIVE!!.. good flow and interesting rhyme sceheme great write

  • 17 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    "sailingggg awayy." Teria the added letters to me made is seem like sarcasm. To me.. Yeh..

    Hummm "her heart thats fake." I personily didn't think that worked out well that line...

    But other then those, that poem was probly the best I've read all day...

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