The Young And Innocent Die

by geeeeee   Jan 21, 2007


She tries to hide the bruises
Imprinted on her arms
This story is completely different
To another case of self harm
Daddy storms right through the door
With the essence of drunkenness
She pleads with him to cause no harm
But her plea is completely hopeless
She scurries back wards towards the stairs
But is greeted by a corner
Her daddy did more than beat her to death
He turned her mother into a mourner
On a cold and rainy day in winter
In the cemetery they stood today
They lowered her casket into the ground
All her loved ones were in dismay
She kneeled beside her bed for many years
And quietly prayed to the skies
If there is one thing that I have learnt
It would be that the young & innocent die

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  • 16 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wow.
    how touching.
    lots of feeling and depth.
    awesome job!!! i loved it =o]

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow.. and based on a true story.
    It's so horrific that these things are happening, sometimes right under our noses..
    Such a chilling poem
    5.5
    *Gem*

    (P.S. Let me know when you try a Rictameter =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Marie

    I love it.. it's meaningful and dark but still so amazing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    Beautiful Poem I loved it Your a born poet Jawwww Jarhhh Really deep and meaningful
    Luv ya

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    I am certainly carrying around a lot of tissue today. So very heart-touchingly sad this poem is Bonnie.
    And so very sad that it does really happen, every minute, of every day, somewhere.

    Touching write Bonnie
    Take care, deary