Sub zero

by fvalconbridge   Jan 22, 2007


Sub Zero is a term I use to describe many things,
It could be weather ,
Or a persons view on things,
Well if I think deeply,
It’s best described as me,
My heart and my feelings,
Or who I hate to be,
My heart is like ice,
Where barriers are formed,
The only way of breaking it,
Is by all the warmth,
The warmth that you give me,
When I’m feeling down,
And the hatred you deliver,
Crushing me to the ground,
Snow is like me also,
So icy and so cold,
Bringing pain to people,
No matter how young or old,
Sub Zero is my life,
My pride and my pain,
The agony that is my icy heart
Never truly slain,
Sub Zero is my feelings,
My hate and sins to you,
Sub Zero is what I’m not,
I never tell the truth.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    "And the hatred you deliver,
    Crushing me to the ground"

    my favorite lines...

    Good job.. this is one of my more favorites out of the ones you wrote that i have read.. i give it 5/5. Keep writing

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