I'll always love you

Oh no!!! keep going! you left me on the edge cliff ahnger!! really though so such strong emotion shouldnt be stopped

What's all this sadness Sarahhh. Wheres the lovvvve.

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This is a cute poem. and im really sorry for your loss if its true. but you have some mistakes. like "knifes" its "knives" and "Everytime you done it" uhm its gramatically incorrect. it should be did insted of done. and "Why didn't get help then" i think your missing a word.

but other then that. great job. just make sure you read your poems over and make sure there arent mistakes.

liz

I really like this one!!! its so good your so creative. keep it up!!

I'm sorry for your loss.
Good poem though. There are a lot of good poets on this website. You're one of them.
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