Broken Bloody and Bruised

by disturbed one   Jan 24, 2007


This poem is not my best but whatever...its pretty long for me...it took a whole page(front and back) to write...lol...hope you like it

Broken Bloody and Bruised

Crying her eyes out,
Asking herself why,
Why am I no good,
Why cant I get a guy,

With white skin turning black,
Make-up running down her face,
Now all she needs,
Is someone to help her replace,

He walks in the room seeing all her tears,
Rubbing her back he asks whats wrong,
Something you'll never know,
About me cause you dont belong,

"Who did this to you my love,
Leaving you broken bloody and bruised"
"Someone left me here alone to die,
I feel completely misused"

All she ever wanted was to hear,
The words Baby, I love you,
But she hid as to not get hurt,
As many girls do,

"Will you please come here"
He had he stand,
He reached into his pocket,
He stuck out his hand,

With her eyes closed,
He got down on one knee,
"You can open your eyes now;
Will you marry me"

She tried to say yes,
But nothing came about,
She looked as if she were dying,
That moment she passed out,

Her head hit the floor,
She was knocked out cold,
Literally drop dead in love,
And only 19 years old,

He felt so guilty for years,
That he couldnt save her, he lingered,
But when her saw her laying there,
He slid the ring on her finger,

He gave her a kiss on the cheek,
Knowing to bid adieu,
He then whispered in her ear,
"Baby, I love you"

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Lmao...umm...i think the person that gave me the idea had a much better version...i just...didnt wanna copy her exactly...but...i honestly didnt think it was that good..=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    OMG Nathan!! This is by far one of the BEST poems you've ever made! I seriously just read that over like..3 times! Omg this is my absaloute favourite one that you wrote!! This was my fav stanza:

    With her eyes closed,
    He got down on one knee,
    "You can open your eyes now;
    Will you marry me"

    1,000/5 dude!!!