Acid Hate

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jan 24, 2007


My ex-fiancee cheated on me. This is for her. Enjoy.
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Press your body close to his, lust for what you cannot confide,
Tease me with your thoughtless, deathly lips, look around through eyes of cyanide.

To my ears that wish not to hear -
"I do not love him" you spit and plea,
"You are my love" you lie awake; your body will not satisfy me.

Press this hate deep into your skin of forgotten, buried lies.
Tell me of the night you spent, uttering sexual cries.

Piercing left-overs is all we are, moving beneath your frame,
Sex appeal and all the lies,
when you finish your laughing game.

"I want a child, a miracle, someone to love me and share ecstasy";
Spread my arms and stab my heart, take away my dignity.

Take this acid, full of my burning love and hate,
Find the words buried deep by fate . . .

You're never happy with lies covering your eyes,
You're never happy with your sexual cries.

So press your body closer to his and lust for what you cannot confide,
Tease me with your cheating lips; look through eyes of cyanide.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This was really deep, and the wording you used in this truelly expressed how you felt. I'm sorry, again, that this happened to you. An amazing poem though. Keep your head high. 5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    The wording and passion were magnificent. keep up the work.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Omg idk how i just entdered my comment i wasnt finished.. lol.. i dont think thats the way you use the word... idk it just sounds funny to me but im prolli wrong

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    So the poem was AMAZING once again.. the flow was perfect as well as the rhymes.. however.. i dont understand it when you say you fiance wanted a child to share ecstacy.. ??

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so very sad, yet such a pleasure to read.
    I liked the repetition, I thought it had great impact.
    You are truly talented.