Only Way Out

by Michelle18   Jan 25, 2007


She's been hurt so bad,
Bad soon becomes worse.
Worse makes her so sad,
Sad then tends to hurt.
Hurt is something she's always felt,
Felt nothing but doubt.
Doubt that's taken her straight to hell,
Hell is her only way out.

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  • 17 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    Wow, just the structure of the poem is interesting. and it's so strong for such a short poem. loved it. beautifully written. (:

  • 18 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Short, yes
    sweet, yes,
    but it has some powerful thoughts behind it.
    Thats what makes it great to the bit!
    keep up the great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    So much emotion with such short phrases...also very powerful and had so much meaning behind it

    Brooke<3

  • 18 years ago

    by Nats

    Wow

    amazing

    you're very talented.

    nats xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This poem was so clever, i loved how each line followed on from the end of the last, good idea!! well done

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