Stupid Friend

by BeautifulxMess   Jan 26, 2007


You always want me to help you out.
As if I'm your backlash little friend.
I can't take you ordering me around.
And you'll have to admit that it's the end.

I can't live with you breathing down my neck.
I won't have you tell me what to do.
I'm sick of all your lies and games.
You can't presume what I've been through.

I heard it all before again and again.
I'm sick of saying sorries when I turn around.
I know I'm being bitter about it all.
But why do you always bring me down?

I know you really don't care about me.
I get that you just hate having me here.
It won't be long before I'm gone away.
And y'all won't ever have to see a tear.

I'll never give my life up for your lies.
I'm staying here until my very end.
You'll just have to deal with it soon enough.
And I just have to say, you're a stupid friend.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I heard it all before again and again.
    I'm sick of saying sorries when I turn around.
    I know I'm being bitter about it all.
    But why do you always bring me down?"

    Excellent write m'dear
    The flow was flawless and you really managed to get the emotion out there and show you're not taking it anymore.
    Excellent poem sweets
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Ahh wow.
    i take it you were mad when you wrote this?
    very nice poem.
    =] i really like the topic too. a lot of people have friends like that. easy to relate to.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Wow i didnt know you've written so many poems!!! i dont have that many ideas haha. great poem homey. lovz TaRa

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Well done. Everyone has a 'stupid friend' in their lifetime at least once. And we can do nothing about it, but hope that they won't be such an idiot as to leave you there. In the end, they end up leaving us and we're heartbroken. And nothing can be done.

    The flow was really well done. And I didn't seem to have a problem with many of the places, so I think it was alright.

    The emotion was not really here. Maybe that was intentional or maybe I just didn't see it. I'm not sure which it is. But for me, I just didn't see it. Keep the writing up. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Great poem.. something i think many people can relate too.. great rhyme and flow

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