All That You Have Is Your Soul

I really likred this, particularly the opening, and I liked how you repeated it at the end, I thought that had a good effect.
The imagery was wonderfully done, as always.

This poem was beautiful. i have only one suggestion for improvement:
Covered in white and covered in gold.- instead of the second covered, use gllttered, sparkled, or something along those lines.

Although fairly short, this poem was very good... It flowed nicely and was very well written... Your usage of words always makes for a superb read... Well done xx

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