Beauty Vs Beast

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jan 28, 2007


A thoughtless slander of beauty and beast,
Where soul meets looks to say the least,
A place where you look, a new mirror stands by,
To tell you of the pretty girl you do not have inside.
Touch your face with pleading hands so pale,
Run your hands over your body so fraile.
You think you're pretty, with your thoughtless lies?
You couldn't be, with beauty covering your eyes.
A beauty on the out, a beast on the inside,
A place where one cannot confide.
Perhaps your the beast amoungst all your lies,
Even though there is beauty to cover your eyes.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Good job, that poem sends a very strong meaning. Well done for writing a poem showing that if ur beautiful it doesn't neccessarily mean ur beautiful on the inside, and same goes with being a beast.
    5/5 :]

    ~BRiDDY~

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    This is great. has a deep meaning. i wanted to keep reading, hoping there was more. yep yep.

    perfect. 5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    There is alot of meaning in this poem, and I love reading that. I like the concept of people that can be so beautiful and have such a terrible personality or no heart at all. I've met too many people like that, and you did a great job on writing about it. Nice word choice too. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I don't know what to say about this poem; however, i love the way you toook the title and created it into something deep and thought provoking.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Another wonderful one.. the flow is flawless again the the rhyming is great... the only thing i dont understand is how beauty is covering her eyes in the last line.. the rhyme just seems forceed

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