Fading {Rictameter}

by disturbed one   Feb 2, 2007


Fading {Rictameter}

........................Fading,
................Hearts turning black,
............Through pain and solitude,
.......Once, the perfect love lived here,
..The tables have turned, we are the victims,
..........Now our futures are at stake,
..............But thats not for us to,
.................Choose if we keep,
........................Fading

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A rictameter is 9 lined poem where the 1st and 9th line are the same and the syllable count is:

1- 2(same as line 9)
2- 4
3- 6
4- 8
5- 10
6- 8
7- 6
8- 4
9- 2(same as line 1)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Now this one i adore!
    The flow was excellent and the words were very well placed
    Brilliant poem!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    I like this one! I never have read a Ricameter before and this, I think, was a nice one to start off with. :) Sorry about the confusion in your contest. :]
    ~Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    That was deep lmao. No Im jk ilu..its really really good. =)