Helpless

by Synh   Feb 6, 2007


Had ever there been a person,
To care for her child,
Perhaps he would be civilized,
Not so much as wild.

The beatings endured when young,
Are more than the mind could bear,
His scars and bruises remind him,
Of his lonely childhood scare.

A swift punch in the stomach,
And a slap against his cheek,
Finished with a throw twelve steps long,
Takes away his ability to speak.

Blood ran down his forehead,
His body collapses with despair,
He looks up in time to see his father,
Slowly coming down the stairs.

The creaking of the steps under his weight,
Warned the boy as he came near,
His eyes crossed when he moved,
His soul filled with indescribable fear.

Pain held his limp body down,
He became sleepy and weak,
A foot softly laid on his back,
His brown eyes begin to leak.

Slowly, his eyes had closed,
Sounds began to dissipate,
Finally, the end was near,
No longer did he have to wait.

Sirens wailed as the boy fell asleep,
Police charged in after the guardian,
They arrest the wolf in sheep's clothing,
And rescue the child of no more than ten.

This poem was written for my neighbor... who nearly died last week from abuse. I want eveyone to know his story.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    This was one sad poem.
    Abuse is difficult to go through.
    I myself been through it.
    The poem was a little shaky
    with the flow. I think you should
    have the closest amount of syllables
    in each line. It just makes the
    poem flow easier. God Bless
    5/5
    <3Tay^_^ily

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    My heart goes out to your neighbour. What a horrible thing to have to endure.

    "His brown eyes begin to leak." - I LOVED this line. The image created from the word "leak", as though the tears can just no longer stay in.

    Beautiful work, despite its morbid topic.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I am sorry for your nebior, but you are helping the world with this problem, by getting the message out there, you are doing an excellent job. This poem was well written, well pinned, the flow was a litttle off toward the end, but nothing to big to worry about. otherwise, this poem holds strong emtion, and is a very good write. Keeep up the good work 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Ohh... very sad and disturbing.. but its the horrible truths of life.. wonderful job still.. the strucuture is good.. as well as the rhyme and flow which is flawless.. spectacular write