The Old Apple Tree

by ben thompson   Feb 7, 2007


For a moment in time we were all that mattered........

Long ago in a field by a old apple tree, was a spot reserved for just you and me.

We'd talk for hours in the tall warm grass.
Life changing moments that would not last.

On a broken down fence we shared our woes.
Me and you we were perfect, I suppose.

But I was a kid and things were bound to change.
Human nature is funny, we're never content, whose to blame.

So on that night with a slight autumn chill.
I ended our relationship, then you grew still.

I could see in your eyes you were already gone.
And where you were going no one belongs.

See all we had was each other, no parents around.
My dad the drunk, your mom spread around town.

So when I broke your heart it shattered your soul.
Creating a downward spiral, trapped in a hole.

Drugs and wild parties became common place.
One night while driving you made a mistake.

How cruel and cold our lives can be.
You lost your life, hitting our very tree.

A burden I'll carry for all my days.
My selfish action caused your drug filled haze.

No matter where that elusive truth may hide.
The grass ain't always greener on the other side.

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  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow ....... huni that is a great poem.it deeply moved me well done xlisa

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What a great story put to verse.....you do so well this kind of fictional write...kept my attention throughout. Well done! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Sad story put to rhyme. Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    "So when I broke your heart it shattered your soul"

    Is this about a first love? That very line caught me off guard because it seemed to be written for me. That's how I felt the day my first and only boyfriend broke up with me. It hurt, killed like you wouldn't believe it. Now, things are good though, we're great friends....too bad you didn't get to be great friends with her...great write, keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job! The story you have put to verse held my attention from begining to end. I love the messeges you add to alot of your poems. 5/5 Take Care Cindy

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