Plummeting Tears

by Sarah Ann   Feb 9, 2007


Is it hard to ignore the whisper?
Whilst you are rushing down to kiss her?
As the adrenaline comes pumping,
Did you ever think of something?
Perhaps I have been waiting.
Maybe patiently debating.
We are falling. You ignore.
Will the tears plummet once more?

Life is complex. Full of choices?
But are we crossing out the voices?
My sweet melody has left me
Living so beautifully free.
Had I lost it? Did it crack?
Well, is it ever coming back?
I'd say yes; but nay to that.
Walls from here on now are black.

And when I knock soon with a secret,
Are you willing to cope and keep it?
Baby, if my words could change your life,
Would you still dance with me tonight?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    That poem right there, proves just how amazing you are, and explains why your on my favorties. It's just unbelieveably good, haha.
    i loved it XD

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Interesting questions provoked in this one Sarah. I liked how you ended it with a question, seems rhetorical. I guess the only person who knows the answers to this one, is you. But it was interesting to read nonetheless.

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    I LOVED THE LAST STANZA and i love your vocabulary u put such complicated things to describe into such easy to understand ways haha i loved it... 5/5 from me!!! great write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Sad, sweet AND good. a simpley comlicated way to describe love...lol >.<

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    This was great. I love the final stanza. But iunno. It seems like there's something missing. or maybe it's just me. Lol. Anywho, this was an excellent write. I loved it! 5/5

    -` Liz

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