The Universe Hums

Well done! i have to give you that. the only thing that i was dissapointed with was that the rating is low. it should be all 5! keep writing, i am in your club now.

5/5 David

"Refusing to exile hope
Along with love's rubble"

Amazing Deb, i feel like i haven't seen your work in ages and this was a lovely piece to get in the swing of things with.
I loved the structure and how each stanza seemed to have a different message
Wonderful piece
5/5
*Gem*

Nicely done. Different style from you but I like it a lot! You shine with talent!

You really seems to have a poetic blood.. :o) Its really very unique, the pattern...selection of words and the image..altogether its all so beautiful.

great write indeed

all the best and take care

As I read this I had a feeling....so I began to mentally rearrange the lines in various orders, randomly sequenced.....The feeling waas true..;-)...No matter what order I placed the lines....it all still made sense!....Good show!.....