Black

by Michelle18   Feb 24, 2007


She puts her eyeliner on so dark,
Her eyes light up with an evil spark.
Black eyeliner releases her pain,
It helps remove the thought of his name.
She puts on more as little isnt enough,
She looks in the mirror and thinks she's so tough.

Black lipstick covers her lips or red,
To her it doesnt matter because inside she's already dead.
No more of a happy, colorful face,
Now its just black because her life's been erased.

She puts on black clothes so people will know,
She's been hurt so now its time to let it show.
She'll go out and people will stare,
Because her beautiful self is no longer there.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    She puts on black clothes so people will know,
    She's been hurt so now its time to let it show.
    She'll go out and people will stare,
    Because her beautiful self is no longer there.
    beautifully done

    it seem you ahve many talents i like this one definatly a vote for you

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    The last line made the poem. I mean before it was ok but that last line made it good. Another four for the same reason as before.

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    I love it!Very, very original and very visual.I could see a girl putting on the whole ''emo'' look, dark black eyeliner, dark lipstick, black attire, and...a frown.Awesome!5/5^_^

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Original poem! o_O I really enjoyed this one.. =]! 5/5 again! and keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    We always look at a person and automatically assume we know why they dress/look the way they do, when the reality is we really have no idea. Excellent job very dark and unique 5/5 GG23

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