Kissed and Reminisced

Good poem

Outside a yellow shining moon,
Had punched a hole in the midnight mist,
We prayed the storm would falter soon,
As we kissed and reminisced.
`Beautiful imagery . Absolutely, and portrays a beautiful emotion .

Absolutely captivating . So vivid, and sweetly sweet (: The flow was great, and just kept steady throughout the whole poem . I could just picture the whole scene .

Stunning .
..__MiNDYY

This was very honest in what you felt and you found a great way to let your own feelings out and were great at putting words together

laura

This was an amazingly sweet poem which you put so much into. I found it to be capturing definitly hearfelt and hopeful. Seemed like a beautiful dedication in some way to say thankyou to someone of which you really do care about. The flow was great never messed up at all throughout the entire piece. The imagery so vivid from the description. I could really picture the moon in my head upon a darkened sky. I loved this poem a spectacular piece of poetry. Well done~mel

Awww very nice
I love this your imagery is always so dead on i can never seem to find a thing wrong with it
nice work
I loved it