Waiting

Awww. wow i really liked this..
i feel so alone myself right now. hatin the place im at.. wishin that i could leave from here.. 5/5

This is such a beautiful poem..i know exactly how you feel....being alone is painful and depressing....but neve let it get you to far down...you might never get back up///Nice job

keep writing

~your fellow poet of depression~
~shannon~

Good job:)

Again, a great base for your poem, powerful, deep emotions, but I want you to make me feel them with your words. I want to feel the lonely confusing you are describing, the deparate longing for someone to care for you and be there for you in your life. You have just tapped the surface of these emotions and I would love to see this poem go further. Again, not trying to insult your work, on the contrary I think, as I said before, it is a brilliant start.

-Tainted Miko

There is always jesus!:D