Tying your shoes

by Independence Forever   Mar 5, 2007


Each person has their own way to tie
but sometimes that job can go awry

bunny ears is the most popular way
but some people double knot, that's their say

loop swoop and pull will never go wrong
but I'll agree, tying shoes is like a song

when you learn it, never will it depart
then one day, to your kids to impart

tying shoes is like a way of life
boys, if you can't tie shoes, get you a wife

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "tying shoes is like a song"

    ^^ I didn't like that part. I just didn't feel that it made a whole lot of sense, but was rather there just to fit the rhyme scheme.

    However, I found this to be both original and unique in concept.

    I loved the ending, certainly brought a giggle to my lips.
    I have tried to write humoress poems and find them extremely difficult, so on the whole I think you did a rather good job with this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Haha that was funny! i loved these 2 lines:

    "tying shoes is like a way of life
    boys, if you can't tie shoes, get you a wife"

    haha, that made me laugh... well great job! and thanks for the comment... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Good poem man,
    its different to your usual stuff, thought it was great.
    -Black night-

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    Hahaha so funny. and very good. 5/5.
    willow oxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Lol i still cant tie my SHOES!!!!!

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