Leave The Pieces

by Tricky Daze   Mar 6, 2007


Leaned on him for many times
Especially the hard ones he pulled me
An angel he was,couldn't see his devil sides
Vanished by his kisses but it's hard for me to be
Eased without his soul that i was too addicted to say

+Leave the pieces of me and please leave me alone

Thrilled every single day when i got myself thinking him
Healed my own wounds,ready to get myself up
Endured so much to him,it's my turn to dump

+Leave the pieces of me and leave me alone

Pierced my heart when i was about to say
Ignited by his eyes and i was to regret
Eventually it really was that good day
Cozy smiles for me to step into gate
Enticed by embrace when he asked
Smiled and said yes to be his wife

+Don't ever leave me alone

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  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    This poem seems slightly ironic to me, although I'm not positive why. It's filled with equal parts of love and hate and, therefore, is easy to relate to for all readers. Word choice could use a bit of improvement and more consistency, but other than that this poem was great! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Quite easily the vocabulary usage was teh best thing about the poem. It had really great imagery. It had a good flow and good rhythem. Again the repition bought alot of effect. I liek the "Leave me" then it goes on to "dont leave me", this again is really effective. One thing through all your poems that i disliked was your lack of punctuation. I odnt knowi maybe thats just me, an excellent read, keep up the great work! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by beautyinainstant

    Awe...wonderful poem.

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