She Loves Me Not

by Love Fallacy   Mar 11, 2007


She loves me, she loves me not,
Our love is like a rose.
Only after time and care,
More beautiful it grows.

Petals fall as words are said,
Are love a question mark.
A fire that once burned inside,
Now only is a spark.

She loves me, she loves me not,
I wish she would have stayed.
Memories used to linger on,
The scent it starts to fade.

The plants leafs start to wither,
We start to drift apart.
Slowly dying from inside,
My love has left my heart.

She loves me, she loves me not,
The stem has finally broke.
Hug and a goodbye kiss,
But no words were even spoke.

The plant once was beautiful,
Just like the love they shared.
But now nothing left at all,
At the end no one cared.

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  • 12 years ago

    by LadyLk

    Genius!! Love the idea of the petals and flower.. She loves me she loves me not!! Whoever she was.. Must have been crazy for walking away from someone with such a heart and talent!!

  • 18 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Aww... this is soo sweet and so tragic.

    More beautiful it grows.

    That's my favourite line.
    Very cute and sweet.
    This is the nicest poem, but in a sad kinda way.
    I loved it
    5/5 much love .xx

  • 18 years ago

    by TrueLover

    I love the rose metaphor, it just tells the story wonderfully. The title makes me think of a song by a band called Tatu. Great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dan

    Nice work bud and yea. I find true poems are more meaningful and heartfelt and they seem to flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    This is also a great poem!! you are creative in all of your poems and that is a great thing! if all these poems are true about some girl that done that to you then i am sorry.

    God bless you and keep up the great work!!

    amber

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