The best love yet

by dee   Mar 13, 2007


At peace with myself is where i am
when im in your arms all i can do is be
nothing seems to matter and all i hear is your heart
its there in my ear yet all around my existence
all i want to do is stay with you forever
never needing to move or speak because our souls are now one
your warmth leaves me wanting more
your touch is felt for days on end
your smile alone makes my world go round
this is a choice that weve both made
needing you in my life is one i cant explain
so let me love you as i always have
and till the day that i have failed to keep you happy
stick by my side for id never know how else to live

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jenny

    Hey Girl . . . I like the poem ... I really hope everything is going well for you. My life has taken many turns within the past few years. It is hard to think about the shit in the past but I just hope that what the future intales will be for the best. I miss talking to you. I hope that we can get intouch once again for I will always concider you a friend in my heart.
    Jenny

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Great poem, i really like it alot, totally 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    I thought this was phenominal. You could definantly feel the emotion in it. I don't really enjoy reading love peoms because I am cynical about love lol...but it was a real joy reading this. 5/5

    Brit

  • 16 years ago

    by Naomi

    I really like your style of writing...I mean everyone has their own unique style,anywho i really like yours and i hope you write more! Thanks for the comment by the way, at least I know someone gets what I'm going through, because I don't know alot. ttyl.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    WOW this was a very deep and passionate poem! I LOVED it! Its so real and thats awesome. I love your writing and you should continue writing the things that are in your heart. Your an exalent poet and should continue with your talent. Good luck!

    Brittany

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