So Many Reasons [Freestyle]

by BrixGoesxRawr   Mar 13, 2007


There are so many reasons why we need to end this
Honestly, who are we trying to fool?
Every one knows that our love died long ago
We can't go around pretending any longer

Fighting continuously [it's like we never stop]
Yelling & screaming, throwing things at each other
Spending nights alone - - crying myself to sleep
We can't go around pretending any longer

You don't care at all how we end up
You can't communicate with me; nothing gets worked out
We just keep things bottled up inside of us [until we finally burst]
We can't go around pretending any longer

You hurt me constantly [why do you do this to me?]
Scream at me, & call me names - - every thing is my fault
You never take the blame for your actions
We can't go around pretending any longer

Our feelings for each other have changed
I still love you, but not like I used to
You can't see the love in our eyes any more
We can't go around pretending any longer

Only one reason I want you to stay;
You carry my heart in your hands & always will
But we can't go on pretending any longer

Brianna Carter
March 13, 2007.

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  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Again dear, take the time to write out "and"

    ***Fighting continuously [it's like we never stop]
    Yelling & screaming, throwing things at each other
    Spending nights alone - - crying myself to sleep
    We can't go around pretending any longer*** = good idea but bad way of bringing it up. I suggest making this one verse two separate verses and correting the flow and the wording :-)

    I like the repetition of the last line of each verse though!

    & always will = and YOU always will.

    Good poem though... despite the petty errors, it managed to strike a thought inside of my head...

    Great job!

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww this is sad! I loved it and I can relate that's why I loved it nice job and great freestyle!

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    I like it loads!!!
    brill job!!
    :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Breezy.. did the same thing that happened to me happen to you? Did you just get out of a relationship, or are you just so amazingly talented that you wrote this one up on your own. Lol, well even if this really did happen, you are still talented enough to write amazing poetry! Really like how you twisted this poem. It sounds really sad, but at the same time, it's expressing love. Don't know how you do it, but it's awesome!..

  • 17 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    Wow! that was a really good poem!!! so full of emotions it soo sad when stuff like that happens! i could really realte to it! but dont worry it was for the better of things!! 5/5

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