by Independence Forever Mar 14, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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I walk three mile to school |
by Black night
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Was a good poem, though to be honest not as good as some of your previous work, still, it had a lightness to it and a reality to it that i can relate to. |
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Nice write and stay motivated |
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This is good i think though that the first two lines are forced, thats what i got, a great poem although |