Scarlet Petals [Haiku]

by Jessica   Mar 15, 2007


Thrilling scents flutter
Scarlet petals confirm pain
Thorns prepare for war

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A Haiku is a poem about nature with the syllable count 5/7/5 and originates in Japan

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I LOVE this. Takes something so beautiful and precious and brightens its flaws, great job.

    5.5
    :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow.
    Loved this poem, a lot.

    "Scarlet petals confirm pain"
    ^ That was my favorite line.
    I loved it.
    The image I get from it is so quite amazing.

    Great poem.
    Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Once again, you portray nature in a way by comparing to humans as well. Nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Ooooo...short simple..full of meaning like it... =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very unique. Great job on this form!

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