Promises

by Tricky Daze   Mar 16, 2007


No tears left to cry
All my pains are living my life
You broke your promises
Just like my heart

You made everyone to love you
They thought you're the Mr.Right
But now I know you fooled everyone
Just like me

Time after time you got me devoted
I found myself like a slave for you
But I let you use me like a toy
Just like anyone in your life

This is your note or letter from me
I'll be a mile away when you read
I won't do what everyone does now
Because it's just me

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Non-rhyming because of the contest
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  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This is one of my favorites. even thought it doesnt rhyme,i love it! it reminds me of someone..i guess thats why i like it cus i love poems that i can relate to. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. This poem is very emotional. It just seems like it seeps through everywhere it can lol. But that's a good thing XD

    As for the structure of the poem, it was done very nicely as well. It flowed nicely and it came to a good end. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    This was really well written. it had a lot of emotion & it was very heartfelt. It was very sasd though. But I can definitely relate to it.

    Beautifully penned, darlin'.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    This poem is so nice. i really liked it. ur a very good writter. this poem is 4 a contest? then i wish u the best. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a very good poem... I loved it!