by Independence Forever Mar 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Lying near death in the alley gutter |
by Vanessa
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I loved the imagery that is shown in this. You did a great job. Great flow, well pinned. 5/5 |
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A good poem a great poem but i feel your ryhme is off or mabye the flow a little forced, |